Project 2 Critique

For my critique, we discussed the possibility of increasing the page size to allow for the photo elements to increase. Overall, my project needed to 'air out.' There needed to be an increase in space in the gutters. There also needed to be an increase in the point size. My initial layout had a lot of text that was tightly packed together that made the catalog have a text-heavy feel to it. By allowing the text to have more room and allow the images to break the grid a little more, it would help to break up the page. I also need to add in some horizontal correlation in the spreads in order to create a flow from page to page.